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The Scribe

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    A feeble flame flickered in the dark room, biting back shadows that wavered near the edge of the light. A small, clay bottle sat on a desk, a stained hand dipping a crooked quill again and again into the ink until well past midnight.

     The Scribe hunched over, his tired eyes squinting in the dim light, examining the day’s work. It kept him up for hours past what he appreciated, and made his hands ache. But complaining wouldn't change anything; no one paid much attention to him. Etching out the last word in a scrawl that he hoped wasn't too lazy, he lay down his quill. This book was finished and he could move on to the next.

     “But not tonight,” he thought, stretching his arms over his head and massaging his hands. Finally he snuffed the lantern and made his way outside. The Scribe's eyes soon adjusted to the dark as he walked down the trail to his shack. The sky was clear and a bright, full moon cast light across the grass and trees on either side of him. His eyes scanned the blanket of shimmering stars above, each one of them twinkling and glittering, making The Scribe smile.

     He came to the end of the scrubby forest and stepped into a clearing. In the center stood his home; a small, wooden shack. He tumbled inside, hardly kicking off his shoes before he was snoring softly with a thin blanket bunched beneath his head.


***

     This was an average night in the life of The Scribe. Day after day, night after night, he turned out pages of calligraphy. Book after book after book.

     Sometimes he scribbled complaints in the margins of the volumes he scribed. Bits of his life hidden among the pages of history. No one ever said anything about these additions, and he suspected the other scribes did something similar.

     Eventually the Scribe married and had children. They were his joy and would greet him at the end of long nights—assuming they were still awake. A lifetime passed, spent mostly at his desk, as both he and it grew more unsteady.


***

     Wrinkled and balding, the now elderly figure sat at his desk. He sighed, setting his quill down. The most recent tome was finished, and he should start on the next. “But not tonight,” he thought, snuffing out the old lamp and feeling his way towards the door. The moon shone above him bright as ever, and he stared at the shimmering stars patterned across the sky. They danced in his blurred vision until his weary gaze dropped. With his coat wrapped around him and his lungs working hard to breathe the winter air, he shambled home.

Warm in bed, his heart slowing with every beat, he submitted to a well-earned rest.

***


     The next day a new hand picked up the quill at the old desk.

     A fresh sheet of parchment in front of him, The Scribe's eldest son began to write.



And here I go!  'Entering a writing contest at last.  :)  Well, you MIGHT have noticed that I uploaded this story last night, but then took it down.  I have two reasons for that.
1.  This is written for a local contest, and for some reason I just didn't feel like uploading it until I'd submitted it to the contest.  Maybe so that I could say it was officially in the contest.  I don't know.
2.  I'd accidentally uploaded a version that hadn't been fully edited.  O_O

This contest has two sections.  The kids section and the adult section.  There's a prize of fifty dollars for the winner in the kids section (which is quite a bit for me).  However, my mom also submitted an entry (to the adult section, of course).  And we realized that our writing styles are VERY similar.  Like, really similar.  And, well, um...  I'm really good at writing for my age.  So we're worried that they're going to think SHE wrote it instead of me.  -_-  Cross your fingers folks.

Aaaanyways.  More on the actual story itself.  I had a lot of fun writing this, although it was a pain in the butt to edit.  Mostly because the contest is for short stories and my stories are usually just...  Um...  Really long and detailed.  My idea of a short story is something maybe a thousand or so words long.  I like writing.  :shrug:  So with the limit of five hundred words, I of course went over seven hundred.  And had to take away a loooot.  I learned how painstaking it is to rip a story apart and take away good details and back-story.  :iconsweatdropplz:  I might actually turn this into a "real" story, just so that I can actually talk about all of the random stuff that used to be in this.  The character actually used to have a NAME, so...  Yeah.

Buuuut other than that.  That's all.  Wish me luck!  :iconcheerplz:
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TheSnareDragon's avatar
Very well written. The end was a bit of a twist, it definitely got me 0.o Great work, and good luck in the contest!